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What essence remains,

Is rendered from my bones<<<felt this

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Liv, thank you. Yes, it’s been a strange journey of self reflection as I begin to write poetry. But it’s felt suddenly very vital. I sometimes wonder why I didn’t start writing poetry before. But I guess it just wasn’t my time.

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“Cocooned in this

Peaceful, cloying, dusty cell.” ❤️

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It's always lovely to have a piece of your own writing quoted back to you, Andres. Thanks so much for taking the time to read!

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The words. Ahhhhh. The internal rhymes. Oooooh. So nice with a relatable message.

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Thanks Rachel! I'll take 'Ahhhhs' and 'Oooohs' any day of the week!

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🔥🔥🔥

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Thank you, Aelius. I'm glad this connected with you!

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