Thank you so much Breanna! I’ve said here before that I was considering another stanza, but it just felt right to leave it as it was. Enough seemed to be said. I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Thank you so much, Jennifer. That's so kind. I'm partiticularly glad you like this poem because it proves that restraint - which I'm guessing is really part of the essence of poetry - can be the making of a piece. What's not said is as important as what is.
I love this!! Well done!! I think you have a wonderful understanding of your own writing(which cannot be said for everyone!) You know exactly when to say more and when to hold back!
Thank you, Katherine! Yes, it's odd how a piece can sometimes feel forced, and other times when it feels you've said enough. Less sometimes is more. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It really does help spur me on.
Oh man, I could feel the heart wrenching as the poem came to an end. Great piece :)
Thank you so much Breanna! I’ve said here before that I was considering another stanza, but it just felt right to leave it as it was. Enough seemed to be said. I appreciate you taking the time to read.
This is so good.
Thank you so much, Jennifer. That's so kind. I'm partiticularly glad you like this poem because it proves that restraint - which I'm guessing is really part of the essence of poetry - can be the making of a piece. What's not said is as important as what is.
I love this!! Well done!! I think you have a wonderful understanding of your own writing(which cannot be said for everyone!) You know exactly when to say more and when to hold back!
Thank you, Katherine! Yes, it's odd how a piece can sometimes feel forced, and other times when it feels you've said enough. Less sometimes is more. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It really does help spur me on.
That's profound !!!
Priyal thank you! That's such a wonderful thing to say. I'm so glad you took something from the poem.
This is a deeply powerful piece right here.
Thanks, man. It felt right. And the right length. Sometimes you don't need to elaborate. It seemed just enough.
Yes, it's perfect how it is.